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Wow i wanted to read more :) and in my opinion I believe they should have made this originally a zombie movie instead of the children's cartoon it was :) ...

Great work, sort of vague but still good, you should get bored at work more often :) lol, i too feel like a zombie at times but that's usually before ...

OK so I too have had a friend that did this kind of stuff to themselves and I wish they could have read this poem before doing all of those ...

Interesting to say the least :) and I had a nice mental image of a bunch of business men dancing to music on a New York street..made me smile, oh ...

Good use of words in my opinion..although i didn't really get the feeling of anticipation from reading this poem, but I'm not a poetry expert so don't take that to ...

I agree the " OMG my parents are dead :(" is a bit over done but you pulled it off well...after reading this i wanted to go read a happy ...