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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When the Clock Struck...

    It's good.Very mysterious.You're right about the 2nd verse.It's quite hard to digest.I don't really get what it's about but it sounds really good

    Dec 21, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Paradigm Shift

    I thought it was a good story line but I think your trying to pile too many big words into it.Make it sounds like you've swallowed a dictionary.I agree about ...

    Dec 21, 2006


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