IvoryRose

Lol this is beautiful. I was concerned for a second when the first line wasn’t Loki. My main criticism is mostly stylistic, but still important commas. Poetry follows no structure ...

Wow this is really interesting! This kind of reminds me of a trailer for a HBO triller and I mean this in a good way. You’re so poetic and figurative ...

First off love the format! I think it’s good to acknowledge the bravery of falling in love and it’s hits home with me since I recently got over my first ...

Oh my god I love fae. Aye it’s a wild IvoryRose with a snazzy review. The premise is interesting and I could definitely read a sequel or series. My issue ...

First off before I get into the review, I can relate to this so much! A few months ago I had a horrible break up to the point where my ...

Great poem, it’s very emotional and dramatic! The pauses help create more depth to the poem and I really like how you kept a continuous rhyme scheme. It had a ...

Happy late birthday by the way! First off, you gave us a lot of action. That’s a good thing especially in the first chapter. By adding action the reader gets ...

Hello it’s IvoryRose again. So you did a good job setting up the plot of the story and it was unpredictable. That’s an advantage because you didn’t do the stereotypical ...

Hello it’s IvoryRose! Here’s what I interpreted from the poem. A person feels isolated from everyone because of their depression. The other people can’t see or understand what they have, ...

Hello it’s IvoryRose here for a review! I thought it was good that the essay was a narrative because it lets you see into the mind of someone with Aspergers. ...

Hello there person that finally understands me. IvoryRose here for a review! I can see that this is a more sarcastic poem, and I agree with your message. I am ...

Hello it’s IvoryRose here for a very quick review. First off, good topic. I don’t think it would just be general though. Maybe dramatic or historical fiction would work better ...

Great way to show love. It is something to think about. Would you still believe in love if love was a regular person? Would it still be as popular and ...

Beautiful poem! The metaphors are not overused and the message is deep. Not only the inescapable truth of death, but that innocence can die as well. Just like Radrook a ...

Hello I’m IvoryRose and I bring thou a review. So I interpreted the poem as a person that feels like an outcast. That because they don’t understand how to be ...