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What the heck was this? When I read this poem, its great since you've actually described what was the mess inside an actual tidal wave. That's good. But you don't ...

The story is too random! You need to think about your character development and you should think deeper about how the story works. For example, first "Matt" was talking to ...

Well I think that was quick for a novel, but like you said, it was a draft for your story. The story itself was fine, but clear out of title. ...