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'so bad' should be 'so badly' 'addicting' should be 'addictive' 'affraid' should be 'afraid' 'undesireable' should be 'undesirable' 'missery' should be 'misery' 'in between' could be 'inbetween' Edit

The plot is completely unrealistic. I know this might be fiction but still it's very far fetched for any of the events you described to take place so maybe next ...

write me, I love yours more than I probably should. I want to steal it and somehow post it all over the world. As for the one above me, I ...

I like this a ridiculous amount. It's so simple, yet it conveys so much. Awesome :D

If you were to give me all that was within your heart I wouldn’t be afraid to tear it apart You've mixed tenses, it makes it kinda hard to figure ...

Hey, great idea behind this story and I really liked the ending. As far as critiquing goes, all I found was two teeny typing errors. 'Bead' instead of bed and ...

Hey thanks everyone, I understand what you mean about it being a little vague... I just couldn't think of a good title and that probably would have helped alot. It's ...

It seems that everything you do is a cry for help. Your life's spent wandering, seeking someone to hang on to. But you never find that one who won’t pass ...

I would agree that it almost seems cliched. It's a touchy topic, bit gory, so maybe you could have toned down the description and focused more on the expression, the ...

First things first, I'm Britt. Give me whatever nickname tickles your fancy, I need a new one... So glad to be here, it's nice to have somewhere to lose yourself ...