ItsMeNathalie

Our love is like a flowing river. It is smooth, but sometimes wild. From time to time it's changing. Our love is like a flowing river. It is with erosion ...

I could definately learn something from your use of methaphors! I like the poem!

I like it! Great story with a nice conclusion! I wonder how you're poems are right now if this was just a poem you wrote for the first time. In ...

I like your poem.. it was easy to read and it was fun. Even though the last 5 lines were different from the others it still was a match. I ...

Great poem! I love the structure of your poem. It is different than a lot of other poems I read. Furthermore it tells a great story, with some emotion, which ...

I've got 5 words for you: I LOVE this poem, AMAZING! I love music, without music I can't live and this poem tells exactly how I feel about music! I ...

I really like the poem. It is beautifully written. But I do think that the last 3 lines don't really match the poem. It is different than all the other ...

The thing between us, It is special. It is more than friendship. It is more than being a boyfriend to me. This is more special! You mean more for me! ...

I like your poem! It is very interesting. I could find a kind of rhythm easily! Very nice. Maybe some more explenation, but on the other hand it gives a ...

I like the story in the poem, however I found it hard to find a rythm like how I should read it. The thing that caused that problem is that ...

Wonderful story! I love it! You're into the story from the first sentence till the last AMAZING!!!!

Very beautiful poem! It reminds me of my fish who died a couple of years ago. From that day on I knew how much you could love a fish and ...

My favourite poem is The Raven from Edgar Ellen Poe. I first came in touch with this poem by a song made by a band called Omnia. It is a ...

Dear friend, Then at night you die away, Into nightmares, Wake up with baggy eyes on a tear-stained pillow, Dear friend, please hear my plea, Never open your mouth again, ...

I like the poem, pretty tough topic, but you showed feelings and stuff very well in this poem! Keep on writing stuff like this. Nathalie