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ItsCharley

  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: What Makes You Feel Orange

    Hi Snowfall, ItsCharley here to give you a review! XD This was so good, I doubt I'll have any compaints ^.^ I love how he writes that to his teacher ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Acrostic Poetry

    Hello there Aley! ItsCharley here to give you a review! I do like this but I have a few things that bother me a bit: 1. Acrostic poems usually have ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Night

    I have to admit, this was very well done. If I was your english teacher, I'd be so proud, I'd show your stuff to everyone and be like "I taught ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Humor Re: The Diary of a Cat Fanatic- Chapter 1

    Hello its Charley here to give you a review! :) This is the most awkwardest, funniest, silliest and greatest thing I have ever seen in my life! I probably won't ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Pirate

    Hi there Sir Benjamin! It's Charley here to review your poem! I really like it I must say, I'd love to know where you got the idea from? :D I ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Shoe Shopping

    Hello Charley here to review your poem! I have to agree with @runawaylove your punctuation needs work, you need to add commas so it looks much more neater. It also ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Habibiti

    HELLO! Its Charley here to give you a review! :) This is great, I love how you used another language! 'Habibiti' sounds so cool. You did an amazing job at ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life Goes On.

    This is beautiful (though depressing), it's so full of emotion, I l o v e it! You seem to make it kind of rhyme in there which I love about ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Don't Leave

    To me this dosen't seem like a poem, it'd be very good as something like a diary entry, but that's something that you probably wouldn't post on here. That's only ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Body is Not Poetry

    This is great, though its sad in a way I loved it! The part about the thighs: My thighs are canvases for atlases, road maps, and interstate highways that lead ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Three

    I love how descriptive you are with some things, it gives me a sense of what everything looks like. I kind of imagine that I'm there, I'm Bella, so it ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: [Review Contest] Brave

    All I can say is this is amazing! I didn't know exactly what he was gonna do when I read the description, I was like "Whoa. This sounds so cool, ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys

    This is so great, my favourite part out of this would have to be: The many conversations that we would have, that mean nothing but everything all the same. Our ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    I loved this, only because it's exactly how I'm feeling at the moment, I feel as though I'm being pushed back under, whenever something good happens, it just turns bad. ...

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Winter

    Hi, I'm Charley (obviously... ;D), It was great though there are a couple bits I'd like to point out that were a bit iffy to me. I believe you could ...

    Aug 15, 2013


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings