-
Re: The Siren Sounds: Based on a true story.
That was really good! I like how you got the words of your grandmother into text (or should I say, story)! A few questions though (about the story itself, I'm ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Greg
You did a good job on this! :wink: Although I have a few tips that might make this better... For the Jewish family that you were describing in this story, ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: prologue
This is good! I would have to agree with Eyes of Eden; always try to put some emotion into the story and also set the scene a bit more. Otherwise, ...
Jul 4, 2008