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Awesome second chapter! I love Ela's determination, even though its hard. I can't really see anything wrong with this one that I didn't point out before. Great job! :]

Thank you! And yeah, the journal is my least favourite thing I've written (for this novel) so far. There is just some information in there that is quite important, but ...

Thank you both for reviewing! It really helped :) As for the first sentence, yeah, I know its terrible. Nothing seemed to fit so I just stuck that there. It'll ...

Thanks for reviewing you three :) @Deathcurrent, being the author, everything makes sense to me. What exactly confused you? That way I can fix it. I've been working on Part ...

Wow, that's a really short prologue! Honestly, you might as well just make it a part of the first chapter since it's so short. It was interesting though. Makes me ...

Wow, I really loved this. You kept me wanting more enough though nothing extremely exciting was happening. It was a nice read, though sad because I feel sorry for Eleanor. ...

Truly Adorable but bittersweet at the same time.

Haha, I just noticed that I did that XP Thanks for pointing it out, because reading it through again, I realized it just doesn't work. I'll edit the names straight ...