I know this is sudden, but I unpublished my current work for a while because I realized I need to work on it some more before posting it here.
I'd like to thank @kingopossum and @Honora for the really helpful reviews. I was able to notice some major flaws in my writing, and now I'm off to fix it now! Thank you for reading my chapters so far
Hey, is it really wrong to include binoculars in a fantasy world? I know they were invented in the 1800's but do fantasy worlds where magic exists need historical accuracy? This is weird question to ask, but seriously? 😅
LadyBugYeah, it should be fine . Depends on the type of fantasy. If it takes place on Earth in the modern day or a recent age, then try to keep it accurate. If it's high fantasy and and in the future (for instance), then make it up as you go and edit it later XD Jul 16, 2019
MageheartI also agree! There's some things that probably wouldn't work well in a fantasy world, but I think binoculars are a great addition. Jul 16, 2019
IsProcrastinatorThanks y'all Jul 17, 2019
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Haha I accidentally clicked 'publish' on the comments section of my draft thinking it'll publish the story. Now I have a blank comment in my own story. Now I'm feeling really dumb😅😅😅
Guys I just posted the first chapter of 'The warrior and the God'. It's my first ever story of the fantasy genre.
AwruWhy can't i find it Aaaaa!It is such a cool name.BTW A veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Late welcome to YSW😜 Jul 9, 2019
IsProcrastinatorActually I'm still learning how this website works, I can't seem to figure out how to post a link to my story 😅😅 Jul 9, 2019
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No Escape • Young Writers Society