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Re: Neytiri
A great Beauty in its's self. Great shapes and I adore the eyes!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: I will always love you
Greetings, I liked the story it reminds me of the emotional effects a person can have on your life :thud: . beautiful,Great but also it can damage and torment the ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: On Barbed Wings
It is not a large update but it is what I got so far so enjoy. :mrgreen: “ Well well boys, Here is the hero again why don’t we teach ...
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Need a main Character to move the story
By Maximilian Bai Prologue In the beginning there where two deities one was named Karboros, One of Light the other named Kerilina, Lady of Chaos.These two have be fighting since ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: The Robyn Academy ~ Prologue [new~final]
I really like this Prolouge. It is a great story and I can't wait to see what is going to happen.
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Writing Without Ink
Wow...That was beautiful! It just made my day.But aside form a few little things it is perfect.
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: On Barbed Wings
Ok thanks guys! I will work on the things that are listed here. :D I will post an update soon I am going through bid tests right now is school ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Monster
I Agree with Taimur, It is very good and well written. I love how discriptive you are about the world around her. Keep pushing and never stop writting.
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Fragments (Prologue)
Nice start really well writen. But I think that the language is alittle strong for a 13 year old girl. Other then that I think It will be great. :)
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: On Barbed Wings
On Barbed Wings By Iron Rose What do you get when a fallen angel gets another chance to redeem himself or herself? This story is about a Devil that was ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Greetings
Hello YWS users I am Iron Rose. I am sorry for not posting my real name but it is for security reasons. I am 15 year old boy who loves ...
Mar 8, 2010