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Re: Do you remember, Anna?
This piece is beautifully written. I love it. You brought me to tears -and that's not an easy thing to do. I love how you developed the characters through a ...
Jul 29, 2012 -
Re: I Imagined Death
This... is simply... beautiful. Well done. I've never read something better. I'm officially a fan.
Jul 29, 2012 -
Re: Inhale Exhale
Since my fellow YWS friends have already corrected your little mistakes, I would just like to say that this is a beautiful piece. I could almost feel her pain, and ...
Jul 21, 2012 -
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Believe me, I've tried putting in the paragraphs. I spoke to a mod about my issue with this piece -the editting doesn't stick. Thank you for your suggestions. I'll work ...
Jul 17, 2012 -
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Thank you. I thought about giving them names but the Light and the Dark are just that -light and dark. Good and bad. I might give her a name, though. ...
Jul 10, 2012 -
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Okay, for the record, there were supposed to be different paragraphs in there somewhere.
Jul 6, 2012
