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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Rose for Whom it May Concern

    I have a question. Did you write this dry eyed? It was truly a beautiful piece, really was. I normally don't have the attention span to finish pieces on the ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Symptoms of Being a Teenager

    Hiya. Well, first of, I liked this. It was pretty relatable and down to earth. I enjoyed reading it, and I also think you could go a bit further with ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Roses of Winter

    Normally, I would go for the darker one, but I couldn't really figure out what it was until seeing the second one. I like the color scheme, I just don't ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Wales

    First off, amazing photos. I, personally, don't think the sun is to bright in the first one. I think it looks really beautiful, and is sort of like the main ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Black And White Photography

    I love black and white pictures. I really liked the second one as well. I thought the first one may have been a bit better with less sky, but it ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Skitttttttles

    It's awesome! Like about everyone else, I love how there's only one skittle with the "S" turned up, and that's a nice focus for the picture. I also loved how ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Until we Depart

    First off, I enjoyed reading this. It was good enough to make me want to keep reading, and it was a spin on the average stuff you get on the ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]

    Amazing. Really. By the way, love the signature. I just finished that book :)

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Common Cliches?

    I hate the storys that go like this- Girl meets boy. Boy has girlfriend. Girl loves boy. Boy realizes girl was 'the one' then they run of into the sunset, ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Words on my Skin

    Thank you :) I did a little editing.

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Photos! (Project 365 - day 4-11)

    Wow! I really like the puzzle piece picture, as well as the shoe picture. I could never do a challenge like that! Have you done a library/book scene? I used ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Words on my Skin

    Stupid . The black felt tip marker rubs the letters against my skin. I imagine the letters, sinking into my skin, traveling to my brain. Imprinted forever on me. Hell, ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: night

    i stir wrangled in the bed sheets sweat caked like sweet teacakes heart pounding i turn but you're not there. i breathe a racing breath looking for you but you're ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 3 AM Speculation.

    I really enjoyed reading this :) Just a point- "So tell me, dear, how did it end like this?" I felt a bit disappointed by the ending. Probably just me, ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Soundscape

    First off, I've got to say it, I love the title. It's so...poetic. Looking at the below review, the second line here- "against baseboards, palms down in a red grip ...

    Jan 15, 2011


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics