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Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1
Thanks for the wonderful review! I used to paragraph space a ton, but I've started combining a but more, your "one idea per paragraph" thing is a cool idea. I ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1
Thank you for your insight, it's nice to finally hear more critical thoughts for a change (really, it's refreshing). I'm sorry that you didn't connect with Kastia as much, but ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1
Thank you so much for your review, I had actually paused in my writing for a while and was feeling very down on it. You've renewed my spirit and given ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: All This Time Prologue
Holy Cow. Wow. Perfect amount of intrigue and intro personality. One little thing though, you say that this will be a book of tears and then say that you hope ...
Aug 11, 2014
