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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1

    Thanks for the wonderful review! I used to paragraph space a ton, but I've started combining a but more, your "one idea per paragraph" thing is a cool idea. I ...

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1

    Thank you for your insight, it's nice to finally hear more critical thoughts for a change (really, it's refreshing). I'm sorry that you didn't connect with Kastia as much, but ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for your review, I had actually paused in my writing for a while and was feeling very down on it. You've renewed my spirit and given ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: All This Time Prologue

    Holy Cow. Wow. Perfect amount of intrigue and intro personality. One little thing though, you say that this will be a book of tears and then say that you hope ...

    Aug 11, 2014


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