InspiredLight

I loved this (:

I liked the feel of this story, the only part I didnt like is that if the main character is blind, how would she have known about the clothing and ...

Thank you for your critique, always helpful! I added more, I'll most likely add more soon, but that's all I have for now! (:

It was very strong. You did an overall good job with your grammar. and the storyline flowed very well, the only part I would change is when you are talking ...

I really love your writing style. You give a lot of detail, and it makes it easy for someone to see it clearly. Keep up the good work!

You have good ideas, just need work on sentance structure and descriptions more, keep writing, I really liked this story. (:

Try as I might, I could not overcome the intense feeling I had in the pit of my stomach, it wrapped around my insides and clenched like an iron fist, ...