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Re: Aliens
I don't really have much to crit here. I remember reading something like it in a school play, but this actually had some pretty good dialogue. The real aliens actually ...
Apr 18, 2007 -
Re: The Tragedy that is, Life
This was really good, just got a bit confusing. But I loved your use of language. It was perfect for that style of narration, because it helped it seem more ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: Tamia's quest IV
Hey! Just read this with all the other parts. I'd been looking forward to it but I didn't realise it was even out lol. Worth the wait. ;) Everything Tamia ...
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: The Wager, Pt 2.
This made me laugh. First time in a while from reading, I'd say. Seems rare to find something that can do that these days. So thanks for that. I loved ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: His Dark Materials.
I thought it was a pretty amazing series. As far as I can remember, I read it a few years back and decided I wanted to be a writer! I ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: POD 3- Coming Home
I just had to comment on this. It's really good, even alongside the other stories up for offer on here. It seems to flow easily, which is good. I know ...
Apr 11, 2007
