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Re: Contest Entry - One Pink Umbrella
I think that this poem is absolute genius. I love the setting it casts and your way of telling it. I also really enjoy the nonsensical way in which this ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: you
I like this poem... Though my only qualm is that I think it would be easier to read as a poem if you separated the sentences, just a thought. :o
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Mirror Girl
This poem is beautiful! I love how you described how God created her, and also I like the overall way you wrote it! :D Good job!
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: What is a hair without a head?
A poem I wrote for my grandparents 50th anniversary :D Please comment, I'm open to suggestions!! What is a marshmallow without someone to taste it? Or a pair of boots ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
GAZILLION LIKE! That was brilliant!
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Should I run or Should I hide? With Grace I have complied
Should I run or Should I hide? With Grace I have complied My eyes are open wide, I'm broken deep inside, I'm crying, glassy-eyed I'm trying to decide, should I ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: While we were in slumber
While we were in slumber The sky a velvet sheet of black, Pricked with shimmering silver and gold, Like glitter tossed across breathless dark, Milky white traces of light shine ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Beauty
Beauty Close your eyes, can't you smell it? That sweetness on the breeze, That tells the story of a hundred flowers distant and unseen. The scrumptious aroma, As it wafts ...
Jan 28, 2010
