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Re: Desperation
So, this is an assignment for my Writer's Craft class in which we had to write an excerpt from a novel. However, it's longer than it needs to be, so ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: I guess we'll just have to adjust.
I think your affinity for macro shots really works, because all of these are very nice pictures. The first is my favourite; the sepia colours combined with the antique-looking key ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Death takes it all
A very beautiful poem. The rhyme scheme really works and the poem has a great flow to it. And somehow it evokes some intense imagery without any description, which I ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Death Walked in the Door
First off, a really great poem. I enjoyed it. It seems very similar to scene from No Country for Old Men , but with a twist. That also explains the ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: The Popsicles
My first thought upon reading this was that if May is this hot where you are, I would not like to experience July. I didn't notice anything negative about this ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: I Don't Want to Die
I apologize in advance for any mess ups in my review, this is my first one. I don't have many notes for improvement, but this paragraph here: I know it’s ...
May 23, 2010
