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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: The girl behind that veil.

    lovely piece. everybody needs some sincere friends or at least a friend. one day, the girl mentioned here, fictional or real, will find someone loving, caring and trustworthy who wouldn't ...

    Jun 30, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The Escape

    You have got some reviews already. And now I am going to make some criticism. The content of your poem is pretty good. I appreciate the narrative approach you employ. ...

    Jun 30, 2013

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Flower Petals

    It is a universally relate-able poem. You did a great job. Considering your age, this is a very fine piece of work. I don't know much about free verse. So, ...

    May 19, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General

    The whole poem including the title itself is too stereotypical. You have to come up with something original. Second, why is the title completely in Capitals? It doesn't appear nice, ...

    May 4, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Tweety Tweety

    Lovely poem However, there are some teeny tiny errors I would like to point out. You guessed it right. I'm reviewing. So, firstly I would advise you to employ a ...

    Apr 29, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Friends

    The poem is short and sweet. But there are some errors that need to be pointed out. *I'll always be beside you "wiping your best friend" doesn't make sense. *I'll ...

    Apr 26, 2013

  • Short Story » Narrative, General
    Re: The Picture of My Cousin

    It is a nice narrative. It conveyed the scene very clearly. But the third paragraph seems to be incomplete to me. Maybe you should add some more detail. I wonder ...

    Apr 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Chemistry

    Nice work! I am giving a review: The poem has a nice pattern and goes along really well. It is quite a humorous work that I enjoyed much. The only ...

    Apr 25, 2013

  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General
    Re: Mom

    This is Hamza for review. I am new here. I like all the emotions you put in your narrative. But you didn't care much about the punctuations, or perhaps you ...

    Apr 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: The Nation's blood

    Great work! I have always loved poems on the patriotic theme. And this one is something that caught my heart. The lyrics are powerful and the words have been used ...

    Apr 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Envy

    Great Work! I don't know much about metaphors but I feel that you employed a very good metaphor here... Envy and hyena. The poem is short and to-the-point. And the ...

    Apr 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Daughter of the Stars

    I like this poem, as it flows really well. The title is eye-catching and the thoughts seem to be quite natural. These qualities increase the readability of this poem. One ...

    Apr 25, 2013

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