InfiniteSnowfall

Hi Sarah12! First off, I have not read the first draft of this prologue. I didn't feel the need to really. You have such amazing reviews over there already! But ...

Hey again! Back as promised. Here we go... Then Paul growled “You can read it when I’m finished.” There should be a comma after growled. “No thanks it’s cold anyway.” ...

Hey RagingLive! I saw you posted the link for the last two chapters for review, but I wanted to start fro the beginning, so here I am! By the way, ...

Hi! I saw your link on the Blue Moon wall and decided to check your story out! You sure have a lot of reviews already here, haha. So, if I ...

Hey! So, for this part, I have a lot of the same critiques as what I said for the last part. The paragraphs are shorter here, but they could still ...

Hi EmeraldLinks! I'm just gonna jump right in and say that I don't have a whole lot more to critique on this piece because Leftywriter and flite covered pretty much ...

Hey loverofthelight! So, I really like this! I like how this shows how much she struggles all throughout college, even though movies make it seems like so much fun. I ...

Hi KapilKDS! Snow here to review your work. Let's get started! :D “Knowledge spirit Zhenxiang, I have come for your advice. My past lives, the spirit koh, and the great ...

Hi! I'm back again with a review for you. So let's go... She was awkwardly tall- as tall as her older brothers and just a few inches shorter than him, ...

The school week is over and I finally have some time! Haha, this was the first on my to-review list. So let's jump right in. :) They held the item ...

Another chapter, yay! :D Haha. You update really quick. I'm jealous of how fast you write (unless this is pre-written?). Anyway, I don't think there are any grammar issues here, ...

Hi Sceptre! Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions, you can ask me. Or you could hop on over to the forums. :) Now, onto the review. I'm really ...

Hey again! Let me just say, this story is so, so good. Haha, I love it already. It's so captivating and your description is amazing. I really like the Fear ...

Hey LogicAndObjections! :) This is a really inspiring and eye-opening piece.Reading this reminded me that a lot of people forget (including me... haha) that we cannot be perfect, and that's ...

Hi Kortez! First of all, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions you can ask me. You could also go on the forums or ask anyone, really. :) So ...