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  • Lyric Poetry Re: drunk on the stars

    I also love this, and I don't have much to add to what others have said. However, to clear things up, in sign language crossing your index and middle fingers ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Am No One

    I really liked this! It was very creepy, but you drew me into the story instantly. The dialogue was all very realistic, as were the characters. I loved how the ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Innocence Bane

    Hey there, This poem flowed really well, and your rhyme scheme was subtle and didn't seem forced. I really liked your first stanza, and your first three lines are definitely ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Ran Away With Ed (We Watched)

    I don't even know what to say to this, except that it is one of the best poems that I have read in a while. I agree with Empress, and ...

    Jul 23, 2011


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