Indianwarrior12

It's good but you need to work on you r grammar a little bit, in the first sentence it should be and Faith shared." also "was,as always" please put a ...

This is a very good story, I enjoy reading this. There are some places I would consider revising synch as She looked up to see Another one of her small ...

This is a very good prologue, I really liked your description of the burly guards dragging in the girl with dirty blonde hair, it Captivates me. ;) It really makes ...

Prologue In the beginning the four elements clashed and battled with one another for control of the planet earth. It was an awful time, a time when the planet was ...