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  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Culture Re: The Traveler

    Hello Taylor! I enjoyed this poem. I find it rather relatable as I live in a small town and I haven't been to many places. I like the imagery you ...

    Jul 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Turn Out The Light

    Okay. I'll keep those things in mind. Thank you for the advice %uD83D%uDE01.

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Turn Out The Light

    Thanks.

    Jul 24, 2017


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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