Young Writers Society

Aw, Yay! This was so adorable! I was actually humming a made up melody as I was reading and that to me just means you did an excellent job! Love, ...

Hey, Moonlight speaking :D So I really liked the theme of the lyrics which reminded me quite clearly of vampires and all that weird stuff. Anyhoo, this shouldn't really be ...

Hey Britishwannabe! Uh, I haven't written a review in a while and the other members who commented basically covered most of what I was gonna say so let me go ...

Wow um sorry for such a delayed reply to this story. I was sifting through stories and found this chapter. Now I can say that I'm dying to read the ...

Hey Sionarama, this was fairly good. It flowed smoothly in certain places and had a nice overall story. Drop a seed let it fall when it is It's would sound ...

Hi StrangeGirl, I really liked this. The syllables were all the right amount and even with something so short you managed to have it make sense. A bitter frost surrounds ...

SHOOT!! How did i ever forget about this! Guys I'm so sorry! Tex I just read the message you sent in my inbox. It was from a while ago this....d..dead? ...

Hey Pink, I've read your other chapters and I cannot wait for more to come. :D So into the review.... “Oh,” he apologized, mockingly. “I forgot we did things when ...

Anna, this story is very good so far. However there seems to be 50 pages!! I couldn't finish it!! Not because it's boring or anything but i have to leave ...

Wow, very nice. I especially liked this chapter. It seems like you're finally starting to blend more peronality and a pinch of drama into the story. I only wish that ...

Tex, who's in the dune buggy? Could it be my character Lance since he's being transferred to position of guard....or do you already have everything figured out???! :O

oops! I totally forgot about this storybook. I'll try and post tomorrow, it's just that pre-christmas festivals in my small town are starting tonight and Sunday!!! :O

Please more!!?? This was very good but a tad confusing. I neeeeeed to know if Hayes was ugly or handsome? For some reason it is bugging me so terribly that ...

Hey Tex? Is it okay, if my dude is very informed of the Malums. I'm thinking something like his parents were guards of the tunnels and so the torch is ...

Name: Lance Kaiden Age: 19 Birthday: December 25 Gender: Male Appearance: 6'3, with a stunning lopsided grin that makes most ladies swoon. Lance has short dirty blonde hair, usually jeans ...