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Re: Memory
The room was bright, lit with one single bulb. The walls were a blue, a bright blue, covered in posters of faces and names that never seemed recognizable to me. ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: M.A.X
"Max, telephone!". My government-guardian yelled from the living room. The government gives one to everyone that needs to be under a watchful eye, especially if they're over eighteen like me. ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Fatal Velocity: Ch.1
Hey, thanks for the recommendations and comments. You asked a couple of questions so I'll answer them. Liz is 17 years old and Jason is 18. Liz suspects that her ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Fatal Velocity: Ch.1
"Liz! Hurry up! You can check your email when you get home! I heard the bus!" My mom yelled from downstairs. I logged of my laptop and pulled out my ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Marked
This is great so far. It's something that I could read forever. Please write some more! You may also want to explain the heritage part;it's a bit confusing. ~Imagination
Dec 18, 2009 -
Re: Parking as many cars as possible
This was a great bit! My only advice to you would to write more of this story! Everyone wants to know what happens next! Also, keep the pasta part. It ...
Dec 18, 2009
