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Ok, thanks. I guess I'll add the rest of the scene in now, instead of later. Thanks for the tip. I just didn't want it to seem to intimidating.

Ok, I made some more changes. This scene also comes up again in the next chapter, just to let you know. Also, if I'm not allowed to do this, let ...

Yeah, I made up the name. I've made up a lot of the names in the story, although I did use some words from Google Translator, such as Tiz Varos ...

Oh, ok. Maybe you can find some place for the last point in the story? It makes sense when you explained it.

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Thank you very much! That really helps. But looking back at the chapter, where should I add in the description? Should I add it in at the beginning or should ...