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And this is the last of my stock of poems. Now I have to go write some. Wander the empty spaces and listen to the quietness of the hour. Watch ...

The last of my weird week and the second to last of my stock of poems. There are a million little things wrong with me and there are a billion ...

There is absolutely no one in chat right now.

From my weird week. This is who I am. I am a person who is socially awkward. The one always alone in the room. I am the person who doesn't ...

Longer poem for you all! Walk through the market, smelling the spices in the air. Turmeric, mustard, myrrh. They smell like home. Turn a corner and walk through an alleyway. ...

Well here's my poem for the day. I might write something based on unity day later in the evening though. Some days you don't know what you want to write, ...

Here, have a limericky thing! If wishes were fishes and I am a fish, why can't I grant my own wish?

Every time I walk outside, I see everyone together and I feel lonely. I tell myself that it'll pass and know it's a lie. It doesn't go away; It just ...

I like this! I'm a little confused by what's going on though. I get the sense that something happened to their relationship, but I can't tell what happened. I do ...

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I like it. Just watch out for typo's. I think there might be one on the very last line. I'm glad you remembered to have proper punctuation in your poem, ...

EVERYONE FOR BEING AWESOME Yes, this deserved caps. :D

This is nice. I like the imagery and the rhyming. I especially liked the fact that you had proper punctuation. My only complaint is that it doesn't look that good. ...

I have no idea where this came from. There are secrets hidden in words. They lie there, in the pages of the old book kept in the dresser drawer. Tomorrow, ...

Two quick questions. 1. Is this only for original novels/novellas? 2. If we have done a critique on a work that has since been taken off/deleted, does it still count?