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Re: Pysical Appearance
Very dramatic, really good I want more! I liked how you kinda wrote it like a poem. Maybe you should've proofread it a bit more. Smart use of words! I ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one Of Speechless
Chapter 1 of Speechless The girl's hands were sweaty and blood started to sip out of them. "Death is a wish that can only be granted if you seek that ...
Sep 23, 2011
