IdlePan

To undertake retelling such well-known, ancient history is a bit of a lofty task, but you did it beautifully. I think you have real talent in writing; I felt like ...

Wow, I had read your original version previous to this one, and, reading this one now, you have really improved it! I got to give you credit for leaping on ...

This story remained on my mind for days after reading, and I still find myself thinking about it every now and then. It even gave me a form of nightmare ...