IdlePan

Theme: The fragility of the human mind. For the 150 words contest. I may edit this some more. I don't think it's that great. Once when I was seven years ...

I wrote this for the Big Random Short Story contest. My story is about a housecleaner in fairyland climbing a tree. In a perfect world, all St. Johns and all ...

Wow. I honestly think this has a good chance of winning. it is funny, eccentric, and original. And very beautifully written. I love it!

I am speechless.

I also agree. Beautifully written but I couldn't really understand what you were talking about. I would like to, though, because it is magnificent.

To undertake retelling such well-known, ancient history is a bit of a lofty task, but you did it beautifully. I think you have real talent in writing; I felt like ...

You are awesome. Your rhythm is elite, your imagery, your vocabulary, your voice. What a unique poem about Christmas. I find it hardly lacking in most everything. You write beautifully!

Wow, I had read your original version previous to this one, and, reading this one now, you have really improved it! I got to give you credit for leaping on ...

This story remained on my mind for days after reading, and I still find myself thinking about it every now and then. It even gave me a form of nightmare ...

*I wrote this for the official December contest* I do not know what provoked me that gray December dawn to wander away from my usual morning’s route and into the ...