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IcyDragonRose27

IcyDragonRose27

  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Forgotten Times

    I'm fine with any feedback you have to give! Thanks for taking the time to write what you did! Looking back, I am seeing a problem with my descriptions. I ...

    Jul 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Forgotten Times

    Thanks for the feedback! It definitely helped! I now see what you mean about the adjectives. I do get carried away sometimes! I always seem to have trouble with endings, ...

    Jul 13, 2018


Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot