Icefire63111

Taste`a`vision`????? I fell out of my chair laughing when I read that! Your character has a great sense of humor, and the voice you gave him comes through nice and ...

huh. Short and cute.

I really like this poem. The last line was my favorite. And (just guessing) it fits into dramatic poetry because it is so un-dramatic?

ok, I really like this as a song. I just wish I could have heard the beat, because without it it seems more like a poem than a song. (Sorry, ...

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Love it! They only problem was that you start off saying it`s a kingdom...then its a pleasant village..... I haven`t heard a narrator with that much voice for awhile. Great ...

Please hold nothing back!!! I can`t get better unless I know what I`m doing wrong!! ************************************************** Anna turned up the volume in on her headphones, attempting to blo

Hi people who are reading this!!!!! OK........ummmmmmm...... (checks scpirct) Oh yea!!! Check out my blog! Or read my story ( it takes three minutes to read) Pm me if you ...

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that seriously killed me!!!!!! I`m gonna go crash into a tree now!!! (Psstt!!! that meant she liked it!!)

My first submission in a series I'M starting! Be truthful; don`t hold back! :smt118 Really people, tell me exactly what you think, cut me into pieces, I can put myself ...

there`s a weird gap between the first six lines and the last ten. I can feel the emotion that went into the poem, it made me sad. :cry: "But the ...

the only problem i could find was in me, not in you and that problem is: I CANT FIGURE OUT HOW TO SAY THIER NAMES!!!!!! other than that, it was ...

// [quote]The woman ran quickly, ever so often glancing back over her shoulder. It seemed as if she were flying; her feet seemed never to touch the ground. [quote] All ...