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* a star next to a word means there is a meaning at the bottom of the page. His feet scraped over the freezing concrete floor. The two guards, who ...

The frigid night air whistled throughout the forest. A girl, dressed all in black, was darting from tree to tree, hardly making any noise. The only sound that could be ...

hi! Starting with editing right away, since its Tuesday! Quote: She scooped up a two cookies and dumped them on a plate. I belive it should be "two cookies" That ...

This is a great poem Cbwriterchick! I just have a question : (this being my first poetry review and that I am a horrible poet.) The lines at the begining ...

Bad girl! Bad girl! You broke the most important rule of all: You told us, you didn’t show us: Quote: he was too sad about his mother, who was slowly ...

*********************************************************************************** CHAPTER 2: I began walking down the side walk, not caring where I went or when I`d be there. Jenny was so stupid, so

Ha! I found this poem hilarous! Just one thing : "Because everyone is an Edward-Cullen-Loving-Zombie" That line is a tad to long. try spitting it up: "Because everyone is an ...

Thanks for his name Kyte! (I`ll go fix that now)

Have you ever met a person that is so annoying that when you hear their voice all you want to do is wring their neck? That`s a great way to ...

New version (Ver. 2) I pushed long dark hair out of my eyes, desperate to find my last class of the day, which was English. After school I was going ...

ok...Just posting this: My favorite author is the Guy who writes The Eragon books. I like writing fiction stories of any genre- though romance is a favorite! I`ll write poetry ...

I really liked this poem!!!! However there werea a few mistakes that need correcting. "It’s killing me, It’s pain." the first line is okay, however the second line is not. ...

Creativity is taken away, Work is given everyday, Imagination is cruelly slain. Regurgitation of information reigns. Individuality runs through my veins. I want to escape. That was my favorite part ...

Great job!!! I was looking through these and found this ironic- my project on Buddhism is due next Monday! No grammer mistakes at all-great job!!!! I hope I do as ...

To start - the story flowed nicely-no clunkiness at all! Second: Julis seems like an emotionless blob. He doesn`t seem to have any thought, any feelings, anything! Third: The horse ...