Iamjustbored

While I do not entirely agree with your point of view, it does have some substance to it. It feels more of a rant than a persuasive essay, in any ...

You have a noticeable theme of Superiority. I would like to this the story develop. Perhaps Elizabeth's inferiority to her sister and her passiveness toward her mother indicates some sort ...

You mention the polka-dot umbrella several times and i was wondering whether or not that plays some significance later in the story. It seems it could be a symbol for ...