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Re: I die
This is great. I'm speechless! It reminds me of a very empty feeling, as though I am incapable of doing anything. I like how you've repeated the fact that nothing ...
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Re: The End
Wow. This is amazing! I love the rhyme scheme and how you use rhetorical questions. I get the impression that the use of the questions suggests that she's either angry ...
Aug 6, 2019
