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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Watched(final draft)

    Hello, Justlittleoleme, as you can see, I'm Zoomie. The Review Key: Insert word, phrase, punctuation, symbol here. This word and/or phrase will be reviewed in the passage under this quote. ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Mechanical Magic

    Hello Webz. Corrections: Through endless trails of blustery waters, was the unwavering lighthouse. The comma you inserted breaks up the sentence, creating an unusual pause and making it a choppy ...

    Sep 11, 2011


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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