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Re: Watched(final draft)
Hello, Justlittleoleme, as you can see, I'm Zoomie. The Review Key: Insert word, phrase, punctuation, symbol here. This word and/or phrase will be reviewed in the passage under this quote. ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Mechanical Magic
Hello Webz. Corrections: Through endless trails of blustery waters, was the unwavering lighthouse. The comma you inserted breaks up the sentence, creating an unusual pause and making it a choppy ...
Sep 11, 2011
