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Re: Crashing Waves
Hey there- Oh man. I'm not sure where to begin. I thought this was pure genious. So original. There is so much life. It flows. It is obvious what you ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Named Suffering
Hey there - nice poem. I loved the fact that you are soley painting a picture - it is only an image that you are making to pull at the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Bruises
Hey There - I liked this one. It has nice imagery, and the movement is nice. The begining confused me a bit, but it was well written - it flows ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Your Voice
Soft Gentle Alluring Sweet It matters not What you say I’m candle wax Under the fire Dripping slowly To the cold Hard floor Below Drifting Floating Sweetly Each day Through ...
Oct 29, 2011