IamHathor22

Falling Apart Am I In pieces Before you I lie Needing Your guidance I try To call out To the world Hear me cry: My new face, My true face, ...

Hey There - Wow. There is so much in this poem... It doesn't follow a specific pattern rhythm wise, and that is different and intriguing I liked it's diversity, but ...

Hey There - Sorry this is so rushed - Im out of time! But had to say how incredible this was. This room is haunted by acts of pain, suicide ...

Each day will pass, Like an eternity of Not seeing your face Not hearing your voice Not making you laugh, But I’ll be content In knowing you’ll love me Forever ...

Okay, forgetmeknot, first I'd like to say nice name - very creative! So this is your first attempt at poetry, eh? I'm impressed - there is some real potential here. ...

Hey There - Wow. I was thoroughly impressed. I am Korean and I have never heard of Sijo. Go figure! Anyway - I liked this a lot. There is a ...

Hey There - I am an avid art lover, and I loved your sketches. THe first two have a distinct manga flavor, but they have something about them... It's different. ...

Hey There - Oh man, where to begin... I loved this. Love love loved it. Such creativity. This is why we read, am I right or left? (If that confused ...

Hey There - This was a pleasure to read, but I have some suggestions... First - there are a lot of cut and clean syllables - they sort of jut ...

Beat me Kick me Stomp me to the ground. Pummel to a pulp, And Never make a sound. Secret Secret No one ever knows, The life that we lead, When ...

Hey There - When the heart is full, of course that is the best time to write! I'm glad you did, I rather enjoyed this one. The use of repitition ...

Hey There - Wow. Wait - I have to read this one again - it is too good... Ok - I love the layout - it is smooth, with a ...

Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation. -Khalil Gibran The sky, painted a vivid blue, was streaked with brushstrokes of steamy, ...

Hey there Young Writers! Welcome! I'm a newer member myself, so I know all of this can be a bit daunting. Just wanted to say not to worry, I'm sure ...

Hey there - All smiles when reading this one. It had a feel good essence to it, and I thought it was artfully clever. Great repetition, and sweet messeges. Keep ...