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Re: Blue Oceans (2 of 3)
Hey There – Wow. This was an intriguing poem to read. It had a varied rhythm (sorry – that peeves me… I’m a musician…) but it was balanced somehow… Very ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
Hey There - Sorry this was so long in the coming! I haven't been on in a while. Okay! So this is your first poem, eh? I must say, I’m ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
Hey There - Sorry this was so long in the coming! I haven't been on in a while. Okay! So this is your first poem, eh? I must say, I’m ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
Hey There - Sorry this was so long in the coming! I haven't been on in a while. Okay! So this is your first poem, eh? I must say, I’m ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
Hey There - Sorry this was so long in the coming! I haven't been on in a while. Okay! So this is your first poem, eh? I must say, I’m ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Hear No Silence
Hey There - I loved this. I saw it in the recommended section and couldn't resist! ;) The picture it paints was so vivid, so clear in my mind… I ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: A Void
Hey there - Let me first say - I was thoroughly impressed. Absolutely. So moving. I loved your play on words with the title. Very nice touch. (or so I ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: disappointment
The sorrow you feel When you understand, There’s no one to help you or haunt you. The pain that’s inside When you realize, That sensation can no longer taunt you. ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: You Fix Me
Hey There - I must say - I liked this. There was a lot of imagery in it - and a lot of emotion. The rhythm was confusing, though - ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Life
Hey There - First off - I want to say there was some serious contemplation going on after reading 'Life'. It really makes you think. But, alas, it was a ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Expression Of The Voiceless
Hey There - Wow. I was... I dunno - the feeling was indescribable. You have got some talent. Let me begin: First of all, your style is very unconventional - ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: That Special Week
Hey there - plz excuse my rushed responce - im half asleep here - but I couldnt resist. Oh man! what a poem! It was hysterical. I loved it. (I ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: A Drop of Crimson
Crying? Me? Why it’s raining outside A drop of water must’ve fall’n to my eyes. Revenge I will have on his true love at last- Kiss her goodbye ‘for I ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Live A Lie
Hey There - THis was very touching to read. You learn a lot. There is a flow, and I am all about rhythm, but I can't put my finger on ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Frozen
Hey There - This was an interesting piece. I really liked it - But I have a few comments to make. Firstly - the beginning has a wonderful little rhythm ...
Nov 2, 2011