IainMorrison

I wrote this, I'm not sure what to call it, piece in the 2 minutes after not answering a call from my ex. I wrote exactly what my mind was ...

Fire... the gift and the curse. In this day and age we can all be named Prometheus and if we are not careful and respectful we all can suffer as ...

I'll have to agree with the first review, needs more emotion, but other than that great flow to the story. Is it a relation to society? How people seemingly become ...

I literally felt as if I was walking those hallways. That was a creepy journey you took me on. Great detail great description of setting, just great. Keep it up.

With further detail that short could have turned into a very big dramatic story. Description would have made this piece easier to read. Your characters are in this, what seems ...

Clown Shirts and Magical Unicorn Pegasus Kittens... Golden !! It got my attention. However, in the story things just seem to happen, with no build up or development. And that ...

Looking down I reached for it but then stopped. I chose not to answer its request for my action. Answer or ignore. Ignore. Did I want to talk to her? ...