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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Those Who Are Nameless: Prologue

    I liked this. One comment I would make would be to revise the first paragraph bit. Questions are good; they can draw in the reader, but the number and succession ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Truth

    Listen! Do you hear that? The voices inside you Are whispering your ultimate fear: You are alone. Hush! Those screams will go unheard. Your pleas will do nothing But fill ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 150 Words of Fragility

    Because my reaction to the story (that is, my inner deliberation as to what the character's real motivations were because of the juxtaposition and contraversion of feelings during the interaction ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 150 Words of Fragility

    I'm impressed with how much you managed to pack into 150 words. In fact, it almost reminded me of a poem in the way that it was short but I ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Will Provide

    I will provide. Do not be afraid, For if you fear the deathly cold, I will take the sharpest knife And skin my very self, Peeling and ripping, Sewing and ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Of Fire and Shadow

    I loved this poem. I can safely say that as I read this my mind took leave of my body and became one with the observer in the story. I ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ghost Train

    Overall, this poem not only gave me very vivid images but also emotions. I'm having a difficult time describing the feelings this poem gave me, so I'm not much help ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Lotus

    Paradise at last. Death brought no pain, No suffering, As if it did not come. But I know it came, Because this place, This paradise, Couldn’t have sprung from the ...

    Jul 30, 2011


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