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That was really good! I liked how you referred to Julia as a "chameleon". Although it was good, I found many mistakes throughout the chapter. Some have been caught by ...

I loved it!!! I felt like I was right there. He didn't only think "Oh she's hot" and "Oh look at her". He actually thought real things and emotions. I ...

I actually think it's a great song. Yes, you do need to watch out for spelling and punctuation. But anyways, it's good. I like the whole theme of the song. ...

I don't think it's a good idea because the schools will be too crowded. Also, all the students who want to learn won't be able to because more students means ...

When I read this, that song came on and i started singing your version instead of the original. amazing job. You certainly have a gift. Keep it up! :)

Oh. My. Gosh. This is AMAZING!!! I love you. I really do. You just made my life a whole lot better.

That was really good! I read those books, so I understand what you're talking about. It was written very well, but dragged out a little. Keep on writing! I can't ...

I I. I am. I am not. I am not you. I am not you nor me. I am I. I am It. I am because. I can see. I ...

I think it was great! The title just grabbed my eye. I really would like to know the tune to it. Amazing, just amazing.

I think it was great! I, too, love the first verse. I think it really relates to those girls who like a guy who likes someone else. Plus, some might ...

It's only the first chapter, just so you guys know that.

Lucy Button rushed through the lobby of the New York Times building. She had long, deep brown hair pulled into a ponytail. she wasn't very tall, yet not very short ...