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This is pretty cool so far. I'm guessing you're having a writer's block on what the Nathalie person will do? That will be interesting. Hoping for an interesting plot later... ...

This is cool. It's one of those genuine but easy to understand stories... The theme was that you should be thankful with what you have, right? Anyway, if this were ...

Nice hehehe, I hate to sound nitpicky but there was a place near the beginning when it said "stair" and I think you meant "stare" also, I think you meant ...

This is good, the only problem that really popped out at me was when it said "anti-clockwise" I guess you just had one of those moments when you knew what ...

Well, DaughterofEvil seemed to get everything, and I guess all the help this review will do will be to boost your confidence a little and reinforce Daughter's points. The mom ...

How would she see all that stuff from the kitchen though? Just a thought. There's probably a simple explanation, but it would be nice to know how... Pretty freaky stuff. ...

Good... I think the other two comments got basically everything. I guess there really isn't much chance you'll add to it soon though, is there? Well, I'm reading this book ...

Sounds interesting... But why's it grouped in the novel I was writing? I guess you just got confused or something. We should ask the administrators about this, since we both ...

Interesting, but I didn't really understand what was going on... Maybe it's supposed to be like that? Some things are meant to be unanswered, like the mystery of the top ...

I enjoyed this, will the main genre for this be horror or action/adventure? I'm hoping both. Giving a story multiple genres is an easy way to make it more interesting. ...

good job again, I got a little confused when it said "you couldn’t hear anything from the inside even if you pressed your ear to the wall" though, because of ...

There's a few places where I guess grammar could be improved, but I don't know how to do that quote thing yet. But you've still written this very well. I ...

Awww I love this, great work! I wish I could write romance, at least as a side plot. But at the end was she supposed to be a hallucination or ...

Amazing! I wish I could write poetry that well. I'm generally only good with science fiction. That includes reviews on the list of things I'm not good at writing. Well, ...

Well, I'd say you're right, but that there's another side to it as well. Destiny in my opinion is guided by, as you said, actions, but also luck, which in ...