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Invisibles. Prologue (Revised)
I revised the prologue from my novel Invisibles. I will be posting the revised versions of the other four chapters. Tell me what you think . Prologue: I circled around ...
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Invisibles ~ Chapters 1 -2
Chapters 1 and 2 for Invisibles. Review Please Chapter 1: The Beginning My name is Idda Jones and I am a cop. I am fifteen and have a gift that ...
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Invisibles ~ Chapter 3 - 5
Chapters 3, 4 and 5 for my novel Invisibles. Reviews please .Chapter 3: Blood is Thicker Than Water When I got to the house I parked the cart in the ...
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How Rain was Created
For english, I had to create a myth about nature. The example was how to camel got it's hump. I chose to do mine on rain when allmixedup and jubber ...
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One summer, two people and too much to handle .
Based on a true story about me. It's my first short story so hopefully you like it. His name has been changed and I tried to fix the story up ...
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Invisibles~ Chapters 6 & 7
Next installments to my novel Invisibles. I hope you like it.Reviews please Chapter 6: Complications I fell limp in Star’s arms, he struggled to hold my weight up as he ...
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Invisibles~ Chapter 8- 10
Chapter 8: New Friends “My name is Ray come on in.We’ve been expecting you for a while now.” She said smiling and rushing us into the front room. Star tensed ...
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Invisibles~ Chapters 11- 13
Next instalments . Reviews please. Chapter 11: Haunting Memories Everything I’m seeing is a blur of colours. I’m going so fast I think I might vomit. I finally stop and ...
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Say Again
Just a look at the beginning of chapter one of Say Again, review and tell me if you want to see more. Thanks Wicked
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Twisted Vines
What do you think? Sorry about the formatting being weird, it did not transfer well... Chapter 1: A Grade Eight GraduationCorrigan stepped out of the shower and grabbed the towel. ...
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Twisted Vines
What do you think? Sorry about the formatting being weird, it did not transfer well... Chapter 1: A Grade Eight GraduationCorrigan stepped out of the shower and grabbed the towel. ...
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The Strangest
Chapter 1“Get up! Everyone!” Nora yelled from the bottom of the stairs, her voice echoing through the halls. I groaned and pushed the pillow off my head. I blinked trying ...
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Twisted Vines Chapter 2
Chapter 2: Hundreds of Miles awayLaila Hundreds of miles away from Corrigan a young girl stepped out of the shower and wiped the mirror off with the cotton towel. She ...