IGuessImAnUnderwaterThing

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Thank ye both.

Thanks for the advice, and the kind words! It means much to me : )

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Awww, that's the coolest critique I've ever gotten! Thanks so much; I'm really glad you liked it.

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This is all there is to the story, really. I can't really recall where the idea came from, but it came from somewhere. This is an older piece, but one ...

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Thanks for the advice, guys : )

Hahahaha, thanks for the advice. I'll look into all that next time I edit this. I'm not huge on the ending myself either, really. When I first wrote this poem ...

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Well, it's a little complicated, as this is a very personal piece, and I also hate explaining poems... I believe that poetry is meant to be understood, not explained. But ...