Hyunthesosarian

I'd just like to say that you can always argue a point with a reviewer if you feel like they are wrong. Don't be a jerk about it, but I ...

Ahahaha, holy cow, reading back over this confronts me with a very clear reason I included Don't #4. Look at me, mixing my metaphors and leaving stuff out! I actually ...

I couldn't say "man" in the title -- that's a one-way trip to a beatdown from half the members in this forum, I suspect. :/ I think we all get ...

Good evening, Black_Panther! I saw the second part of this prologue didn't have any reviews yet, so I'm coming through here to get my bearings. I hope what I have ...

Here's the second part of chapter one. I hope the world Haraan lives in becomes a little clearer with this section. I will comment on the work of anyone who ...

Hi, Lily! My, it looks like you've got a bit of a queue going on :D Do you mind if I add one more? Heritage Chapter 1.1 It's fantasy, about ...

Good evening, Silversun! (Do you have another handle you would prefer?) I suspect this story is about vampires? I can't be certain. Beginning stories in media res is a great ...

Good aft-- evening, Bickazer! I consider 6 PM to be the start of evening and the hour just turned. :] Since you expressed this chapter isn't representative of your best ...

A 5-second HTML fix for the webmaster. leads to a 404 error. takes me to my friends page. Could someone please change the link on the "Friends" tab to the ...

Good afternoon, Bickazer! Thank you for being my friend. :D It seems I've come to the party a little late, so people have beat me to a substantial amount of ...

Good morning, Kyla! Or is it Marie? I'm gratified for the choice, but I don't want to make the wrong one. My first thought with your story is that it ...

My university's writing publication is pretty atrocious -- you have prose wanting to be poems and poems wanting to become prose -- the end result is a bunch of esoteric ...

Hundreds of sharp spires rose from the depths, some in uneven pairs or trios, some with terraces providing security from the yawning gulf below. Haraan's view was that of an ...

Good evening, Swires! You know the thing when your favorite football team scores a touchdown and everyone suddenly jumps into the air with their arms outstretched, palms forward and screaming ...

Good evening, Mind! I hope what I found can be of use to you tonight. I'll tell you straight out that writing any fantasy using Tolkienian races makes the job ...