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Re: l'Expedition (Chapter Three)
As this story progresses I'm afraid I'm going to become less of a critic and more of a fan. Seriously, my reviews will slowly begin to turn from critiques to ...
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: Why Must The Bird Still Sing in its Cage?
This was a very well written story. The descriptions were great, though a few parts of the story felt a bit rushed. For example, Jia Huo and Shen Zhi traveling ...
Aug 27, 2012 -
Re: l'Expedition (Chapter Two)
Hyjoinks here. Once again you've proven to be a master of character development. Kaval is quite the contrast to Luko, but at the same time just as developed. This is ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: l'Expedition (Chapter One)
Hey there psudiname, First I would like to congratulate you on giving me a very enjoyable read. Your story is one of the first that I've read that didn't have ...
Aug 16, 2012 -
Re: Ashara
Hey, it's really good. Sort of cliched with the friendship between the peasant and the princess (at least, I'm assuming she's a princess), but your story was well written so ...
Aug 16, 2012
