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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Good Boy

    Thank you for your feedback! I was trying to use incomplete sentences in this story to make the mood choppy and unsure, like MC's emotions. I'll tone it down when ...

    Jul 5, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Good Boy

    Thank you for pointing out my little mistakes! I will fix it right away. As for the plot, the dog was a live dog, but his owner had passed away, ...

    Jun 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Good Boy

    Thank you for your feedback! The dog's owner had passed away before, hence the dog resting on his owner's grave. You guessed it right, the dog was just waiting its ...

    Jun 20, 2019


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