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This is the first poem in the semi-biographical book I'm compiling for (maybe) publication. This is about my trip to Florida with my family when I was five years old. ...

Author's Note: rated 16+ because of the use of the word "bitch", referring to a female dog and the consumption of alcoholic drinks. Western slang is used heavily in this ...

Here on request, I shall do my best! Heh-heh. I knew he’d gone before I awoke. I agree with Flower, this line seems off. By preference, I'd change "awoke" to ...

Dear Demoness, Congrats! I really liked this one to bits! Though, it does need a few tweaks. Do you fear death? A little boy was born, learning in life you ...

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Somewhere; Somewhere, before my heart turned crafty, I fell stupidly in love with you. Don't ask how, don't ask why. I don't reveal such truths As those. Sacred—stamped crossly beneath ...

:) Thank you so much!

Things I Shall Review: ~Poetry of all kinds * ~Short Stories ~Novels/Novellas ** ~Scripts Things I Will NOT Review: ~Fanfiction *** ~Photography ~Lyrics *--This is my best field, so you'd ...

Thanks everyone! You all wonderful advice and, admittingly, you all amuse me terribly. I think I'll be sticking 'round here a long time! :)

Personally, I enjoyed it a lot. I don't know if it was the way it was written, or that I was staring at your icon and was picturing Doctor Who ...

Hey Rstegs15, First of all, I have to say that I liked it. It had its sweet and charming moments, which every romantic short story should have. But, I also ...

Well thank you! And, by the way, that sentence made total sense. ;) Actually, most of my poetry is based off dreams I've had over the years. I had this ...

Tree Be; Make me, break me, Impale me upon a tree. Then let me fall back down— Lusty, dusty— Back upon the ground. For, my dear, the tree be More ...

Salute! Howler, Very nice! I was delighted to see something about duels because, sadly, I'm addicted to them (seeing and reading about them--not actually getting it them [although I do ...

I liked the poem enough, not saying that it wasn't great, but that it could just a bit of work. At first I didn't like the juvenile voice that was ...